My WRITING *

    This morning I was late for the fatigue duty. When I was going to attend a PE class my bicycle was towed away by guards. If I want my bicycle back, I have to pay fifty dollars for the guard to      redeem it. Now I have to walk to the class, and I begin to remorse.                                                                                                                                                  Today the PE class is one hundred meters and eight hundred meters test. In fact I not good at sports, so I run very slowly. After the class my legs were so stiff. I think it will be unconfortable tomorrow.

Teachr, I know I am not good at writing sometimes I even feel afraid. Everytime, when I try to write I have no idea, I don't know how to describe my feeling that make me worried and worse things is I am afraid to ask for help.  You suggest us to read more articles, novles or something eles, now I am try it. My grade is very low, I know. I hope my writing will be progressive but it would be slowly. I tell that just want you understand.

There  will  be  a  midterm  test  next  week.

I  haven't  prepare  all  my  test  already.

From  now  on, I  have  to  study  hard  in  order  to   pass  the  test.

I  can't  chat  on  the  Internet  anymore.

I  have  to  concentrate  on  my  tests.

After  the  test  is  over, I  must  have  to  go  out  taking  a  trip  to  reduce  my  presure.

FIX:

 I will have my mid-term exams next week, but I haven't prepared for any of my tests yet. From now on, I will have to study hard in order to pass them. I can't chat on the Internet any more; I have to concentrate on my tests. After the tests are over, I will have to take a trip and reduce my pressure.

I have been four weeks not go home.

I never leave home so long time before.

While this time I'm so miss my parents and grandmother.

I want to listening their voice and talking about my school life to them.

And introduce delicious food, famous place, and interesting things here to them.

When I felt lonely, I always think back their face, and imagine what they doing now. 

I'm so love them very much.

FIX:

  I have not gone home for four weeks! I have never been away from home for so long before. During this time, I miss my parents and my grandmother so much! I want to hear their voices and tell them about my school life, and introduce new foods, famous places, and interesting things in Dou Liu to them. When I feel lonely, I always recall their faces, and imagine what they are doing now, because I love them so very much.

Hello,my name is peggy.Listening soft music, reading novels, shopping, playing badminton, and travel is my interest.I have amiable personality, and love to help everyone.I know my english write  is  not good, but I'm still keep trying.I will do my best to learn that.